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Thursday, May 3, 2012

Broken girls

A pretty girl
with broken eyes
all the boys
want to fix
A wounded soul
an elusive pull
foolishly jumping
into waters too deep
a taste of hero
shining armor knight
prove to the world
the boy's a man
she'll pull them in
she'll pull them down
to the depths
of a broken heart
watch out boys
for broken girls
they don't want to be saved
they just want to drown

1 comment:

  1. O, tracy, you are hard on these broken girls. I would like to help them for sure. Are you sure they just want to pull us in?

    This is a good following of your last week's Broken Boy poem. Not a perfect match, but rather needed thoughts. There would be hundreds of ways to go on either the boy or the gir who is 'broken.'
    ..

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