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Sunday, March 4, 2012

I'm Gonna Love You

I'm gonna love you
Til your heart's so full of me
Til you can't breathe without my touch and taste
Skin to skin

I'm gonna love you
The way you want to be loved
Should have been loved
Need to be loved

I'm gonna love you
Like I'm the last one who ever will
Like I'm enough and always will be
Like you'll never hurt me or break my heart

I'm gonna love you
Soft and gentle
Passionate and strong
Full-force, non-stop

I'm gonna love you
The way I want to be loved
So maybe, fingers crossed,
You'll love me like I love you


  1. From experience I would say that a magnificent love like yours is rarely reciprocated in intensity. I hope you are the exception and if you are,bloody good luck to you!:)

    1. Unfortunately, that's too true. It's a nice thought though. Thanks for the comment :0)

  2. yes a love giving freely is certainly worth its weight in gold and worth reciprocating.

  3. It's always good to have a dream as long as they realize that is all that it is. Nice work.

  4. I know it is certainly a pipe dream, but it's a lovely thought.

  5. It's a beautiful reality if one wishes it so. Never let that Reality fade with fiction. Our lives and loves are ours to hold near, and only ours.


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