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Saturday, March 3, 2012

Hiding

I move,
Step back
Confused and fragile
Hiding from truth
But it stalks and hovers
I shield my face from the probing eyes
But not reacting is reacting,
Right?

Ostrich misses but never stops moving life
Just delays the rising flame
Burnt fingertips

A moment more
Deep shuddering breath
Brace to face the fire
Acting to react



This is in response to Theme Thursday at http://www.theme-thursday.com/
and ABC Wednesday at
http://abcwednesday-mrsnesbitt.blogspot.com/2012/03/h.html

7 comments:

  1. You capture the flight and fright of life perfectly..breathlessly..great write (and thanks for following)..Jae

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  2. Not reacting IS reacting, yes.
    Very clever!

    ROG, ABC Wednesday team

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  3. Beautiful sentiments in writing.

    House in the Prairie
    Rose, ABC Wednesday Team

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  4. Sweet poem and so true. It took me a while to learn but facing issues actually helps them resolve a lot faster, and the pain while initially intense, usually eases faster when faced!

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