River Song
We walked down by the river,
The smell of the Savannah marsh
Thick in the air,
Twilight heavy on our shoulders.
Glances shy with infatuation,
The first stirrings of love
Whispering through our hearts.
Oh, the beauty of that day!
Wish I could tuck it inside
To live again and again.
Young colts unsteady,
But aching to learn
The rules of this complicated game.
Grazing hands,
Then grazing lips,
With soft sighs
Held and released,
All to the sounds of the river
Dancing past our feet.
Oh wow I love this and I especially love the ending :) cathartic
ReplyDeletewonderfully romantic... :)
ReplyDeleteAh, the stirrings of love are wonderful to remember, aren't they? Your poem was filled with joy.....and make me remember too.
ReplyDeleteTruly terrific piece of writing - I was there with you! Great stuff - quite uplifting and TRUE Thank you... With Best wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com
ReplyDeleteSo romantic, this took me back.
ReplyDeleteThis is very tender and sweet and reminds me of when I was sixteen........
ReplyDeleteoo la....ha...reminds me of youth and first times...and fumbling and figuring it out as you go along...the river makes a fine backdrop to it as well...smiles...
ReplyDeleteThis brought back memories to me too. What a time that is when love is fresh and we are fresh with love.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]